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Who cares about the pain?
I don't feel it.
There's no feeling in my heart
To show me how much it can hurt.
When you're alone.
When all you've got is you.
When you're second best.
Third best.
Fourth.
The anger kept me alive.
The hate I had for you.
The challenge of overcoming your might.
Even though I shouldn't have to
Because I'm the Prince
And you're the peasant.
I am superior.
Royal blood that flows
That of the greatest of warriors
It flows from this wound in my chest.
From a heart that died long ago.
And as I look upon our enemy
The one who ruined our futures
Who will stop at nothing to hunt us down
To kill off our race
I turn and see you.
I see Kakarot.
I see our saviour.
My saviour.
And as I die and float away from my body
I see you take the time
You buried me and said good-bye.
You really did care
And had respect for my life.

So now I see that
You are the real Prince of our race.
You are the one and only saviour of the universe.
With a heart that is alive and pure.

And I will always be in your shadow.
I will always call you Kakarot.

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I wrote this from the perspective of Vegeta from Dragon Ball Z as he's dying when Frieza send his Death Beam thing through his chest... :'(
I was so moved by how Goku took the time before his fight with Frieza to bury his body... It was just so sad, yet beautiful at the same time. Vegeta was really changed because of that.
Anyways, enough with the spoilers. I just wanted to write a poem for Vegeta because I made one for Goku before.
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I hope you like it. :)

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~Bloody-Damsel-01 Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I loved this scene, no matter how terrible, violent and tragic it was... wished he could have beat Frieza, avenged his -wait- their race by himself. Goku's view of his Saiyajin partner/rival has changed ever since. At the same time a 'new' Prince resurrected from his old self... what a beautiful poem!
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~Spearnox Apr 20, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Thank-you! :D
Someday, maybe I'll write one about Piccolo, like my other two DBZ poems. Maybe when I finally finish reading Dragon Ball... I'm so lazzzy. But by then I'll have a full understanding of Piccolo's character. And it would make sense that I write about him too, since he is my favourite character out of them all. :D
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~Bloody-Damsel-01 Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! :)
Go for it! My overall opinion from him is that he needed some love/trespecr.. to start watching his universe in a different way.
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~Spearnox Apr 20, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Hmm, yeah. I'm sure it will have something to do with that. About his race, and his original intentions, and then Gohan. :)
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~Bloody-Damsel-01 Apr 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
*nod*
*respect.. my bad.
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~ReaperJivid Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love this moment, although I always hoped he would get stronger and at least be Gokus equal, btw how do I submit litterature like this.
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~Spearnox Mar 22, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
When you go to the submit art page, beside the "upload file" button, there is an "Add Text" button. You click on that and then copy and paste whatever it is you've written into the space provided. Then you press "okay". :)
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~ReaperJivid Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh ok cool! Thank you!!
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~Spearnox Mar 22, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
No prob! :D
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